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love is great or so ive heard and for that im willing to wait
ive had my heart broke time and again it hung like open bait
whats the point of a broken heart and how do you expect to mend
you cannot fix what he has done and what i hold within
even though i want to hold your hand and kiss your lushious lips
ill hold my tounge, shut my mouth and keep my hands at my hips
there is one special person for me
and the best thing is it all comes free
free of pain
free of hate
free of lust
free of wait
hes out there some where maybe right next door
and he'll be the one ive been waiting for
©2005-2009 ~electracute
:iconelectracute:

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just feel in the mood for a poem

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:iconjanne-landet:
This is a very good poem. I like the rhyme.:nod: (Can't write a poem without rhyme:-) Not me, at least.)

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:iconcelticwhispers:
That poem is beautiful! =D I love it!

That image makes me want to make some LJ icons. ^__^;;;

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:iconelectracute:
thank ya'll muchos!

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~your just across the street which is a mile to my feet. i know i must be brave but im just too affraid but i wanna be where u are~
:icongreenfairy88:
i truely like this one! kind of my life's theme at this moment!

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~the reality of today will be the dream of yesterday~

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